Book Anaylsis on Unequal Time Book

Hello, I have an essay written out already. I would like a sociologist major to review/edit/proofread and make sure I fulfill the instructions for the paper. Along with, helping me with a strong catchy intro, established context and ending with a solid well stated thesis argument that`s sociological. The book analysis is on Unequal Time by Gerstel and Clawson. I want to make sure whoever reviews my essay knows important sociological concepts and that I touch on those from the book to my essay since my Professor is very strict.