Final Draft Revision- Afforable housing in Denver

The request is to address the annotations found in reserach essay and add “my voice” into the essay. Please just follow the essay and address the annotations properly along with adding the voice to thr intro or conclusion. attached comments from the professor is found on the needed “voice” that needs to be addressed and the other attachment I am unable to load from my phone. would you pls provide me with an email address to send over?!